Thursday, August 14, 2014

Mini Essay

         When you go hiking or swimming, you think nothings going to happen to me.  Well that wasn't the case for David Potts.   He was to busy having the time of his life, playing around and not being aware of his surroundings when he turned his back and BOOM a waved took him in.  I don't like it how people always suspect that its always the park owners fault every single time.  Well its obviously  the person who died fault, they should've been more careful by being more cautious and taking the signs more seriously.  Its a shock too see how many people think that its park owners fault.  There are so many accidents that happen like this and always end up that its the park owners responsibility of their death, thats just wrong.
         
        Many people died in the past years by being so careless.  For example Paula Ramirez and  Elizabeth apparently walked off a steep cliff.  They didn't even bother to look around for what the signs say or look on the ground where they step.  Those people need to be more cautious of their surroundings.  Another incident was with Kevin Oakley he drowned in a pool.  Kevin Oakley should know whether or not he can swim so he doesn't drown.  People should really be more aware of things.

        All these different people that die over the past year such as David Potts, Paula Ramirez, Elizabeth, and Kevin Oakley they all have been careless.  They need to learn how to read the signs and not ignore them.  The park owners shouldn't be the ones responsible for that persons death.

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