Thursday, December 18, 2014

Parent commenting plus portfolio

ENGLISH PORTFOLIO: http://brisumida.wix.com/briannesumida

PARENT COMMENT:  Good job with your work this semester.  You are making progress in your writing skills.  Remember to check for spelling and grammar errors.    I am glad that you have been more responsible about your work.  Try to be a quality producer--STRIVE to do a good job on every assignment.  I liked reading your "Coming of Age" essay.  You had a lot of voice in your writing.
I would like you to fully understand the writing assignment.  Support your writing with details and remember "chunky paragraph". 

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