Tuesday, February 17, 2015

Holocaust

The word “Holocaust,” comes from the Greek words “holos” which means whole, and the word  “kaustos” which means burned, was historically used to describe a sacrificial offering burned on an altar. Ever since 1945, the word holocaust has taken on a new meaning. The holocaust is now known as the mass murder of 6 million European Jews as well as members of some other persecuted groups, such as Gypsies and homosexuals, having killed 11 million people total. The Nazis thought Jews were racially superior and they were a threat towards the Germans.

During the holocaust many innocent citizens died throughout this time.  Jewish people  were not the only ones targeted but many others were as well.  The Nazi army targeted people such as Gypsies, Homosexuals, Jehovah’s witnesses, and the disabled for persecution.  Whoever tried to resist the Nazi will also be forced to labor or even murder. “By 1945, the Germans and their collaborators  killed nearly two out of every three European Jews as part of the Final Solution.” Millions of Jewish people were killed because the Germans felt that they were a threat. During the holocaust about 11 million people died and six million of those people were jews. “Between two and three million Soviet prisoners of war were murdered or died of starvation, disease, neglect, or maltreatment.” These inhumane acts had scared so many people. So many family members were lost to the holocaust. The holocaust was such a bad time for Jewish people and many others, this deadly time period will never be forgoten.

Thursday, January 29, 2015

Allusion Poem

Everyday is the same routine
day by day 
night by night 
you don't know how I feel 
or what its like 

being under your commands 
constantly telling me what to do 
i just can't stand your demands
they're just useless 
just useless

The two sisters
standing right in front of me 
just staring at me 
glaring me down 
with your big brown eyes 

you can't control me
you can't control anything about me
not my actions
nor thoughts
nothing you just can't control it

you can't control me
my fairy godmother by my side
everything is possible with her when she's here
she will defend me
not you

One wave of her magic wand
Poof, be gone!
i have been waiting for this
you can never see me coming now
never




Thursday, December 18, 2014

Parent commenting plus portfolio

ENGLISH PORTFOLIO: http://brisumida.wix.com/briannesumida

PARENT COMMENT:  Good job with your work this semester.  You are making progress in your writing skills.  Remember to check for spelling and grammar errors.    I am glad that you have been more responsible about your work.  Try to be a quality producer--STRIVE to do a good job on every assignment.  I liked reading your "Coming of Age" essay.  You had a lot of voice in your writing.
I would like you to fully understand the writing assignment.  Support your writing with details and remember "chunky paragraph". 

Friday, December 5, 2014

Angry letter (draft)

1544 Haku Street
Honolulu, Hawaii, 96819
December 3, 2014

Shimazu Store
330 North School Street
Honolulu, HI 96817

Dear Shimazu Administration,

My family and I have been going to your store for many years to eat shave ice, even when it used to be B&S Store.  Every time we were around the Liliha area, my sisters and I would beg our parents or grandparents to go to your store, wait in the long line, and eat shave ice, especially the strawberry.

However, recently we have had some concerns about the prices of your shave ice.  Just  last weekend my family and I went to your store to eat shave ice and found out that your prices have gotten extremely high.  I noticed that throughout the years that I have been going, your prices have risen from about $2.25 to the current cost of $4.00.  I understand that the size of your shave ice is huge and there are many different favors to choose from, however,  the price is to high for a weekly treat.  Many customers also want to add toppings such as azuki beans, mocha balls, condensed milk, or li hing powder.  These additions cost 75 cents or more for EACH topping!

Although you have the best shave ice on the island, spending $5.00 for an afternoon snack is more expensive than two school lunches!  Perhaps making a smaller sized shave ice for a reasonable price would be better for young children who cannot finish an entire shave ice by themselves.

Shimazu shave ice is a well-known treat and should be enjoyed by all.  If your prices were more reasonable, we would be able to enjoy your shave ice regularly, not just as a once in awhile  treat.

I understand that since your shave ice is so popular that even if you raise your prices, people will still come.  But I  feel that your longtime regular customers, like my family and me, will not be able to continue to enjoy our favorite strawberry shave ice as often as we would like.


Sincerely,




Brianne Sumida